A variety of people hate to wirte English essaies in Taiwan, so let me tell you some tips.First you have to keep the diary in English every day.Next, we can make pen pal with foreigners. Finally, you can read the English book every day.I believe you will increase your writing ability.
team(jessica & iris)
Although this is a very short piece of writing, it gives me a clear picture of what you want to say. Also, it contains general information, a thesis statement, and a concluding sentence. Very well. Yet, there are a couple of mistakes you may like to avoid next time:
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2. Everyday is an adjective. Every day is an adverb phrase. So, it is more accurate if you say “ You can read English books every day.”
Good job, girls.
thanks!!
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