Along with the communications conveniently, there are more and more people like to go abroad. There are two ways that mostly people would like to choose. The first one is backpacking and the other one is tour travel trip. The first one is more freedom, for example, you can choose whatever you want to go, slow down your step watching the beautiful scenery and to observe and learn from different kind of life.
However if you choose the tour travel trip, you have to follow the tour guide step.
And the tour guide would tell you should buy this one and that souvenir. At the end you will realize that all of the money you have are spent on the souvenir, you didn’t enjoy your travel very much. But the only one advantage of tour travel trip is you won't get miss in the foreign country. Because missing in the foreign country is really a terrible thing. You will delay your schedule, and if you don't have any partner to help you. That is the really worst thing. No matter what kinds of way you choose. The most important thing is you have to enjoy yourself!!!
Iris, I found you can express yourself better than you used to. I'm happy for you.
回覆刪除Still, there are some rooms for you to improve your writing, vocabulary and grammar in particular. For example, in line 1, I guessed you were trying to say 'convenient transportation' instead of 'communications conveiently'. Also, you have a two-verb situation in the sentence 'tehre are more and more people like'. Did you know what's wrong with it?
In line 5, were you trying to say 'wherever you want to go' or 'whatever you want to go'?