Every day, when I wake up the first thing I have to do is doing the labor education. Every day I Woke up early and swept the toilet. Sweeping the toilet is fine; however why do we have to do the labor education every day? Waking up early and doing labor education makes me feel tired and annoyed easily.
Although we can choose the time of labor education by ourselves, the assignment is random selected. No matter which time you select, the result is totally different. Like me, I have chosen all the labor education at the noon, but the result is in the morning so I have to wake up early and arrive before 7:15. How difficult is it. According to what the principal said, doing labor education can train us get more responsible and make friends with different subject students. However it’s worthless doing labor education every day. In my opinion I think we can take others school as a model. They do the labor education about two or three times a week. It’s easy and quite free at the same time and we can also have experience from it. Not just like the slave doing the work all day and have the group leader check the area where you sweep.
In my opinion have the appropriate labor education is fine. Yet, too much labor education can’t let us learning the meaning of the labor education.
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1. Every day, when I wake up the first thing I have to do is doing the labor education.
改: Every day when I wake up, the first thing I have to do...
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Every day I Woke up early and swept the toilet.
改: Every day I woke up early and swept the toilet.
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Although we can choose the time of labor educat
4. Yet, too much labor education can’t let us learning the meaning of the labor education.
改:Yet, too much labor education can't let us learn its meaning.